The Beginning sounds like some DJ Jazzy Jeff & The Fresh Prince. Any Ways Nice Job!
Great, but change the drum sounds.
What you've got here is an unlikely chord progression and an interesting, melodic bass line, something rarer than grammatical coherence in the audio portal. My only advice is that the reverb on the drum track kind of makes the song sound like music in a soft-core porno. The beat's perfectly fine; I just think it would be better if you recorded an actual non-synth drum track, or better yet, sampled one.
I know what you mean. Originally, this song was just a barebones drum track that my friend Winston had layed down. He wasn't doing much with it, so I layed most of the music down and he helped arrange it. I had intented to do a remake of this song with a drum break I created in Reason (with drums that sound live, rather than electronic) but used his drums instead because..well, I got lazy. Anyway, thanks for the response.
i like it
you used some default fl sounds but i liked it, especcially wen the bassline came in.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.