good song, will be used

I'm making a new video, this song will be used. You will be credited, don't worry.

Lol, my speakers aren't THAT dodgy

Okay song here. I like whole "mellow" mood you're trying to set, but from time to time some dissonant notes pop in and ruin things. Try to make it more organized.

The biggest drawback though is the recording technique used, which--all jokes aside--is pretty terrible. :P There's this "air" sound going on throughout the piece; get rid of it!

is this recorded live?

oh wait..yes, my speakers are dodgey lol...
actually i liked it, very genuine and peaceful-
4/5 ;)
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