Happy Hardcore Style,

Oooou ;o

I like this one,
It would sound amazing while high,
And i could see a nice DDR step chart for this song,
Great job Man,

intresting

Dont know the former mixes but I just judge this one for what it is for now. At least... somebody NOT showing of with *CHECK HOW QUICK I CAN MAKE MUSIC* cause 99 out of 100 times I just rather dont listen to those tracks...

The overall theme of your track is more then good, its stable, the only thing that I would like to see in a different way is the approach of the lead line. Its like a quick one that HAS to get the train on time so we just do it like a short version, do you catch that drift? If you make your intro a bit longer and more intresting and then let the lead come up, it already gives it way more space to express the story.

Hope to hear a full version when finished :). Keep it up, you know what you are doing.

Awesome.

My first suggestion is add something more in the beginning of the song because when u first listen to this it sounds like most techno songs and theres no signature thing in the song to make it stand out and make people say "Oh yea i know this song! Its by DJClayFace!".

Also because you used the worlds most common bassline i would recommend adding more original stuff to it so people don't think its a remix =P.

9/10
5/5

Pretty good song overall =).