I hear.. something
This got to me. It sounds like a deep professional trance song ready to escape. I've never heard anything similar to it on Newgrounds, but I think that it's going to come to you naturally. Experiment with more types of percussions, drums, and work on that bassline. Work also with powerful chords, and different types of automation. This piece is far from brilliant, but the instrumentation, the plucking synths work in a way that I only hear pro's able to do, please continue, you could be a great artist =)
DJ BrixX