its not all that good, personally I think its beyond saving but thats me.
you were aiming for space but you hit aqua.
this sounds more like an under-sea melody. not a space sound.
You're right, it's not that good.
After I made it, I thought it sounded a little like space, but now that I think about it more, it sounds more like like under the sea type of stuff. Well thanks for your comments. You should check out my other stuff.
I like it, but there's a few things that I think you should work on.
The song is just the same basic thing repeating over and over again... it just goes part A (0:00-0:15), and part B (0:15-0:27). I'd say you should make the notes move up or down a bit, and make it a bit longer. Variety is the key to making something enjoyable (But not too much). Also, the second part at some steps sounds a bit not flowing.
Overall, good, but need works.
I like your ideas man. thanks.
You should listen to my other song and write a review. It's called "Two-Dimensional World." It's still pretty repetitive, and every time I listen to it I find something else wrong with it or another way to improve it. But it's still a good song.