Well I have nothing that I'm working on right now and well I'll remix this I'll send ya a message when it's done... that may be a while.
Nice Beat, Just you need some work with the drums and percussion. The bass is great but for this song you need some more powerful drums and percussion to give it that TRUE beat!
Ok...so lets get down to business
I like the melody line you came up with and I like the way the song comes in...once the bass kicker comes in though I couldn't dig it anymore. The kick felt too hollow. For a song like this I'm feeling a hard kick or definitely something sharper than what you have. Also the drums kind of let me down. I expected a nice intense drum track but the trips on the ride weren't doing it for me either. And you should keep the snare in it. Try experimenting with using a sharper kick and an open hi-hat instead of a ride and see how that sounds. Good idea here, but the percussion needs some work.
Hey thx for the review... yea i had no idea what to add or take away from this song. Its a good start (really good start) just i went completely blank =P. But yea thx ill try out the kicks n' snare.
it gives you that dark techno beat,sweet!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.