EDIT:
TRACK UPDATED 6:TH OCT. I STILL AM IN THE PRODUCTION PHASE WITH THIS ONE, THIS VERSION IS BEING KILLED BY THE LIMITER (dynamically), TRY NOT TO PAY ATTENTION TO THE ACTUAL MIX, RATHER THE PROGRESSION, THE SONG ITSELF AND WHAT'S GOING ON IN THE SONG INSTEAD OF GETTING HOOKED ON MIX-DETAILS! :)

I re-uploaded this version since I worked on the song for a couple of hours today.

PLEASE NOTE:
- Since I have not even started to mix the song yet (I won't do that until I'm satisfied with the production itself, also the mix will be made in Cubase - everything you hear now is Reason 4.0), I very much would like to get feedback on the production, not the mix itself.
I think I actually am going to finnish this song, so any advice and pointers will mean alot to me.

If you don't know what I'm talking about, here's the difference between productin and mix:

PRODUCTION:
- The way the song is built (like, are the breaks at the "right" spots, are the , usage of effects, is it monotone, are the instruments well picked, are some samples crappy and should be replaced... Is there somehting missing at certain times in the song, etc etc.

MIX:
- This would be the more techincal part of the song - ex: what instruments can't be heard, are there something sticking out too much ouf the mix/too little, is the bass too spread out and needs to be compressed - and other issues more of a techincal type. If you think the bass suck for some reason, it's not that relevant to me to know right now, since I haven't even started to mix it yet.

BUT:
- The two parts, production and mixing DO go hand in hand, so, if you decide to be a sweetheart and give me a review - please do so with a production-aspect in mind primarily (but any good tip is appreciated of course)! :)

Thank you very much in advance! :)