Hmmm

Seemed a bit more like Ambient Electronic or Trance than Industrial, but it's nice for what it is. It's relaxing and the beat is well-defined without being annoying. The progression was unfortunately a bit slower than what fits my tastes though. And the random slowing/dead-end was way strange.

I'd say take the fist three quarters of the song or so, speed up the progression between the levels of the song, and just leave off the slowing ending. But that's just my opinion.

8/10 and 4/5.