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Release feat. Nicola Foti

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Author Comments

This track was produced by Nicola Foti. It sounds a little wierd because the tempo was slowed down in the studio. Vocals on the chorus are also by Nicola Foti (words to the track were all written by me).

A personal track discussing issues with who I am in the music genre. It goes from everything about fake friends, to always (even now) being looked at as just another 'white boy' or Eminem wannabe. Y'all really think I look like Em? Not a chance, but race is discussed. Lemmie know what's good, what needs to be fixed, etc.


Overall pretty good

It definitely needs a bass line though. Also, try to turn up your mic volume a bit. There's a few places where you are seriously competing with the beat. I do like the "weird" effect the slow-down had on Nicola's vocals though.

As for the lyrics, you did well. Somewhat moving, but would have had more effect if they had been brought out more.

Hope that helps. If you get a chance could you review some of my stuff?


It needs bass. Like a drum kick at least- I'd say a bass line too. As a work in progress it has great potential.

NimbusTheGeneral responds:

Appreciate the review. And it's something I can actually agree with. It does need bass.

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Credits & Info

3.99 / 5.00

Sep 15, 2008
9:28 PM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
4.9 MB
5 min 22 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.