it was a good song but the voice and music were too soft. I can barely hear it in areas where it was supposed to be loud......other than that its awesome, keep at it!
I was a bit skeptical, but this ended being surprisingly well done. (No offense meant to you.) The beginning was very nice with the transition and it's rather nice. You lost some point because it's more boring than the original... but I may be a bit biased with that, being a huge MM fan, so I didn't lower it much.
Overall, it's rather nice with the exception of it being a bit on the dull side towrds the middle.
Even if the voice sounds very funny, we can still hear your talent at mixing. Pretty good.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.