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Inner War [PDM]

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this ones taking me ages, playing around with vocals and very much not happy. still, would love some feedback on this bad boy.

some parts need to be changed.

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once again revewing while listening

the tune from 0:01-0:25 goes on too long 0:26-0:38 bump u the backround sound taht comes in it would sound great the vocals from 0:39-1:00(i think) i acully dont mind just need to be a bit louder for me but not too loud 1:05-1:15 i have no complaints about the rest of the song pretty dam good


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not bad

At 0:25, seriously turn up the backround noises that come, it would add to the over all dark feeling of the song, and put it in longer strides. Oh and make a instrumental version in my opinion


Elfire responds:

yeh its one of the first things i made back when i knew nothing about anything xD


Nice but missing something

I like the core of the song. The beginning is nice and the lyrics need some tweaking but are generally well done. Reminds me of Nu-metal like korn or Linkin Park.
However you are really lacking in three areas. First, diversity: the song is a whopping 5 minutes and there are no major changes following the first minute. It gets plain boring. Second, the drums are way too simple. With a song like this you need a heavy, fast and rich drum beat to move the song forward and fill those empty spots. I recommend adding more metal and deeper bass to the drums. Finally, the guitar starts off good but it never gains in complexity or richness. The simple crisp of the guitar gets real old real quick.
Because of these problems the song feels a bit empty and lacking substance. i think you are onto the right idea though.



We have a winrar here

I downloaded this awhile back before I bothered to get an account here but yeah this song is great. It's nice to see actual talent on newgrounds instead of crap unworthy of even reviewing. Can't wait for some new Blinder content.

Peace


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I see you.

I follow all your songs and 5 the ones that deserve it on a normal basis.

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Elfire
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Listens
5,837
Downloads
516
Votes
301
Score
4.11 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 15, 2008
2:50 PM EDT
Genre
Industrial
File Info
Song
3.9 MB
5 min 38 sec

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