love this song
you did an elegantly beautiful job recreating this masterpiece.
i could listen to this all day
I've listened to a lot of your stuff, and it's hard to find someone who can take the simplicity and beauty of the original works and add so much power and energy, yet retain that original feel. Kudos to you!
Audible sweetness ^______^
The one thing I want to start off with saying is how the song starts off the first time and it sounds so beautiful, and then by the time that the song starts the loop, it is the exact same-but it has a different feel and ... dunno how to describe it. It just feels different from the first time it plays through, and its a good different. Scores big points in my book; however, I am going to agree with ViperRodriguez down here in saying "please don't call this done just yet." But I have different reasons behind my saying that. I would like to hear you add your own content to the song in the second-third of the song. Have fun with it. I heard your song "before your time," so i KNOW you are capable of elaborating on a little tune and making it something just as fun and beautiful. Please don't doubt yourself if you are, cuz I believe that you could have a lot of fun with this tune and it turn out great.
What you have hear is great. HIgh marks and enjoyment all around, but to get that 10th point outta me, I wanna see some compositional creativity ^_^
I think you did a really good job capturing the spirit of playfulness while at the same time making something that is very dramatic. One thing, however, I think you should work on is your endings, this one ended in mid-phrase. It might have been a good thing to fade this out or if you wanted to make it loop than the song should come down to a calmness with which it started so that it flows into the introduction. I think you should give this tune one more try before you declare your self finished with it. It's almost there. Really nice work and thanks for sharing.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.