To be honest with all the listeners that have taken a gander at this track - i want you to know that this is just a rough copy of my feelings on what the abyss holds - which is " anything " to me. Happiness, sadness, the unknown or even just inspirational emotions. i do tend to jump around ALOT in this track. Thats just who i am to keep the listener entertained and not stuck on a single beat. not trapped , tho i end up coming back to its original source of sound in one way or another-
hope you enjoy -
welcome to all criticism and critique [first track] anything would help- even a good vote !
Pretty Good!
You weren't kidding when you said this track jumps around! It was like you had 4 different songs taking a turn here, lol. But there were some parts I really liked: 0:50-1:36, then 2:08-2:50 and 3:08-3:40 when you went back to the main beat. The other parts of the song weren't bad at all in my opinion, but they just didn't all fit together in a single track. 4/5, 8/10
haha - yeah i did jump ALOT but thats just what i felt about the abyss- so much rolled into one- as long as you liked what you heard even though it didnt mesh so well together!
thanks for the feed back-
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This isn't even close to the best song on newgrounds that I've heard, but it has got to be the best first track/beginner track that I think I've seen (not just on newgrounds)
sweet bro- i definitely appreciate the criticism and such. i would of had more up but i never got any reviews on what sounded good or not ha-
thanks for the input man-
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Reikyo 
Prom1se 
Doumaaa 
