not bad for a attempt =).
You stuck with a good old fashon punk rock sound here. Drums could be changed up some here and there however its about the sound you'd want for punk rock haha. Not bad for a first attempt. Great work on it for sure. (any noob comments here? lol) Its a lil dead towards the end (meaning everything kinda just...goes off lol) other then that its not bad at all just a lil more work and this will shine out big time. Deffenatly need some vocals to this for sure though. Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1