The intro is awesome
Same with the rest
this is really good... some good variety in the rhythm and melody... drums also work pretty well to the guitar...
i'll second what was said below... needs an intro that does this song justice... and this will be killer once the vox kick in. Any takers yet?
check out my latest if you have the chance. I sometimes do vox collabs but I can't promise anything as I have a lot going on.
Really good so far. I found myself playing along on my keyboard, it has great potential for additional voices. Even by itself, I think it can stand alone. The different sections can really back up a verbal story or message. What you've written so far calls certain emotions and depending on what you say vocally will define them. It's very versatile, I can already feel anger, hope, empowerment, even tragic just from the instruments, the overall tone will eventually be defined by the lyric. I just hope you can write an equally intriguing story for lyrics to complement the music.
I know it's not final but it needs an intro, those two bars of eighth notes aren't cut'n it for me. The transitions are okay so far. I'm assuming there will be some expansion on some of the sections. I'm also interested to hear how your going to close this.
As good as it's sounds now, it's still far from finished, I think this is something you'll have to dedicate some serious time to. All you can do is work on it until you've reached satisfaction with the piece. If your going to share the development of this with us on this web site, then please let me know when you post another submission. I would really love to hear how this evolves into a finished composition. I wish you good luck and thanks for sharing.
This is some really nice work, specially for a "demo".
This has a really nice feel to it and is played in a way to where a bunch of different voice types could do the vocals for the song. It leads up and changes really well too. The chugging of the guitar sounds really good to. Some sick little soloing was going on in one part too. Props for that cause it was really good.
Keep up the work, hope to hear more.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.