yeah!

Hell yeah man. This is sounding like it's really coming along. That intro was fucking ace. That reese around 35 sounds like it needs a little bit of tweaking though. Maybe try turning the semi all the way up (I'm not sure but I think that's essentially the same as raising the notation up an octave... which might make it sound like crap. Who knows!)

Try backing the reese up with a sub bass that works with the same melody. You can also try experimenting with some more hi hat tricks. One thing I like to do is have one hi hat with some delay on it and one without. You can make some really fun rhythms that way. It's a hell of a lot less stress then going in and changing the velocity of each note.

Oh yeah, also try filtering/ automating that reese. You can get some really crazy sounds by changing the properties of the synth in real time. I know this is a work in progress, and what you have right now sounds awesome. Just try tweaking some things and you'll have gold.

Cool

I don't know what to say, sorry for my lack of constructive criticism.
Not my expertise in audio, but great work.

oh ill bro

the demo sounds awesome bro my only problem (well not problem but personal preference) would be to have the lead in the beginning a bit edgier but its all up to your taste...the songs still ill as hell

nice!

great job onthe song man! cant wait to hear the real deal. Good luck & keep it up