An extremely repetitive little song- pretty much the same melody on the rhodes all over. Same drum pattern as well. The rhodes sound itself is extremely basic, could need a little more reverb just to space it up. Or maybe adding some vintage sounding distortion, making it sound like those classy ol' tracks with lp crackle and lo-fi rotating rhodes- y'know what kind of sound I'm talking about? If not, tough luck :(
Drums sound like some preset "Rock" kit, not really interesting, adds a rhythm, but doesn't really pack a punch. Bass isn't really audible, but sounds at least decent. I think a siney sub bass or other kinda synth bass would fit better.
You seriously need something more, be it new instruments, effects, parts or new melodies, but something more is needed. Cause this track is just the bit too repetitive. Decent starting point though.
Hey this was much better than mercury
I Like this one it was relaxing enough for me xD
4/5 --- 8/10