An interesting sound here

A good track here i like how this is presented and sounds, has some good quality seems like it could use some more stuff too it though, but i will get to that ofcourse. Alright so this was pretty interesting and it gets started right away, so was notbad at all, i like what is here and it has a good vibe about it, infact this will be one of my faves especially from the day, i think the only issue here is that it is just too short, or ends eruptly so maybe thats something to work on. And so as i end this review, good woek, keep up more style like you have here and hope to hear more of this kind of stuff from you, it was fun and a pleasure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so this is where i suggest a few things that can possbly help and improve on things, and i really do you look into some of the options that i have availble. And some options or feedback i think is important here is that it was just too small or short, you should think aboout extending and stretching it somewhat more.

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Don't change the song! I LIKE The "Conflicting" tunes.

hehe!

sounds retro to me. like some sort of hyped up mario thingy. XP

A little too busy

I can see the first part of the tune is great, but when you've suddenly got a conflict of the two melodies playing over the top of each other, it stops working well.

It's far too short for a proper tune, so work on making it loop, or increase the length to around 2 minutes. I think that these two issues being sorted would make the tune sound vastly better.

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bit short

and the ending shouldn't be so apparent when it's a a short piece like this that most people play in a loop anyway, and i really liked the kind of crazed rumblings in the beginning before the main beat came in and overpowered it, very good job for such a short piece, reminded me of the music on my game boy advance games

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