Loved the song, the intro was perfect. Set the scene perfectly. The weird bell melody was great. The main part of the song, and the best part. Really liked the beat too. OVerall a greatly perfect song. Good job
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Thanks! Your the first person to call one of my songs "perfect". Much appreciated.
the intro was boring but it got better after that, really I don't know what else to say about this, it was good don't get me wrong, but it wasn't as good as it could've been, I think the sound that was introduced around 1:15 shouldn't have been there, it took away from it a lot, everything else was good, keep at it
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This tune has a good beat and pacing setup, though it really could use quite a bit of work with the melody - to me, it sounds like you threw it in there as an afterthought, which doesn't do the piece justice.
Personally, I would change that around by changing the instrument that you used - go for something with strings, as it would work nicely with the synthesised counter melody and would even compliment the beat. I could see it being used as a part of a middle-ages or even ancient times defence game, as it just conjures up some of the imagery of Age of Empires and Civilisation, from when I played those games back in my childhood.
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Lol. Thanks. Yeah it looks as though I'm gonna have to rework a couple of my songs.
Let's see, then.
Although the beginning was kinda boring, it had some kind of old RPG feel or something. Which isn't a bad thing, mind you.
Overall, the beat is nice. It has a good ambiance.
But it still lacks something. A real melody. These little bells thingies were acting more of another support instrument rather than a melody.
If i could give some advice : make a real melody, maybe try selecting more carefully your sounds, and at last, i think a heavier beat wouldn't hurt.
Hope it was of some use.
(§ Jorma Poyer AKA Deflektor §)
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Thanks I'll think about your comments. Thanks again.
This is really the kind of song that I would think to see in a RPG game, but it might need a couple of adjustments to be used in one, but it's pretty close. You may want to think about making some songs that could be used in games. The song was pretty interesting in itself. It isn't really your everyday song to be honest. That made it fun to listen to and I do have to admit that it was pretty catchy. Overall a pretty good job.
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Thanks again for the review. I might start thinking about making songs aimed at being in games.