I'm sure you won't like this!
Based on the fact that I've created electro house myself (not posted up here) and also mix electro tracks live as a DJ, I've got to say you aren't really making electro house, bro. The kicks at 0:12 would NOT be good at all for beat matching IMO. Next the sound that you have used for the bass isn't really that phat. Maybe it might sound better sidechained IDK. The random percussion everywhere kind of makes it sound like a drum solo or something, especially at the toms around 2:07. And I'm also really not feeling that lead sound but that's just an opinion. It just makes me think of old ass house music. You need to work on getting a more new school groove with glitchy percussion instead of this disco shit. Overall, you've got the structure down you just need to work on getting THAT sound. The thing I think with electro house where it differs from other EDM genres, is that there is little room for originality. Well, there is, but without those certain sounds, it just doesn't feel like electro, ya dig?