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.:-{Broken Wings}-:.

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I haven't really written anything in a while so I figured I'd better get on the ball... This isn't my best work, but it should serve as some good backround music while doing homework and such. Make sure you vote and/or review!

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Nice!

Reminds of after a war has ended and the person is walking across the battlefield.

Sounds like it could fit in Lost Oddeysey at the beginning.

NIce and calm also - great
Nice work.

Tamadrum responds:

Wow, Sorry I didn't respond for the longest time... I haven't gone back to listen to all my old songs in SO long...

That being said, I appreciate your review a lot pal.

Cant believe you did this!

I honestly cant believe where this song took me. its like your music is tied together perfectly between these 3 songs. Denial, then Broken wings, Then One Day remains. I shall writs what i see ;D.

This song taking off exactly where Denial v2 left off. The man enters his town after the attack by the soldiers. Horror overcoming him as he sees the dead villagers sprawled on the ground. men, women and child scattaered about. As the mans blood begins to boil he runs from building to building taking what he needs and stuffing it into his pack. Thoughts racing through his mind. Then at 1:37 hes once again at the top of the hill. And as he turns away from his town he knows what must be done. But how to go about it he knows not. Slowly he approaches travellers on the rode first. See who will hear his tale. As time passes he gains some followers. more and more come to his call to end the tyranny of the king until at 1:58 he feels he is ready. he takes his new found army of warriors to face the king on an open field. The following battle is glorious, as steel clashes against steel both armies numbers dwindle. Until all that is left is the Single man that started it all. And the tyrant king in front of him.

then comes One Day Remains.

well done tamadrum. you are absolutely amazing :D

if its sloppy im sorry its a lil late where im at

Tamadrum responds:

Wow, Im sorry I took so long to reply to this, I hadn't visited the song's page since I put it up. Im in love with how your able to associate all my songs together with one story, It really is a pleasure to read all the stuff youv'e written for my music. :)

It sounds like background music for a war.

Or for the end of a war, conversely. When all the King's horses and all the King's men are trudging back home after losing again. (Ah, I love rhyming in a sentence. Makes me feel all... "squee"-ish, inside.)

This is a really beautiful piece. It WAS rather dragged out, though that's my only complaint, because it was very good. =D Nice work. 9/10, 5/5

Tamadrum responds:

Awh man, now i feel all squee-ish inside... XD Thanks for the tip.

Sounds very mystical

Love it. It sounds very mystical kinda legendary as if a great war is going to take place. Would make a great background music as you said. Overal great job :-)

Tamadrum responds:

Thanks, most of my stuff is more of the backroundish type... not really meant to be in the forefront nessacarily... I cant spell. lol.

Beautiful / redundant

This song was good, but I couldn't listen to it for a second time. It really got dragged out too much.

If you shortened it up a bit, my rating would be much higher. Another thing you could improve on is your variety of instruments. That goes hand in hand with what I said earlier, if you use the same drum beat in the back round the song is going to get a little boring.

With all that said, it's still a good song. It could just be a lot better with some modifications.

Keep it up :)

-X-

Tamadrum responds:

Yeah, it was really late when I wrote it, and i'm still using the demo of FL so I cant save (i have to get it all done in one sitting). So anything I noticed that I did wrong I couldn't change... But you are right, I did need to change it up some. That seems to be my main problem in composing... Thanks for the constructive critisism, I'm always looking to improve my self.

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
6
Score
4.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 11, 2008
3:41 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
4.4 MB
3 min 11 sec

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