I have to say

I like this one much better than the first one I reviewed, drums are great and rhythm is flawless. The first reviewer is right, it's hard to tell if that's bass. It sounds like I can hear bass in left ear and guitar in right, and guitar shifting over to left for the mini riffs throughout the song and chorus Anyway, great job :)

Well...

The clean guitar is really nice, but the distortion has some tone issues. The drums are okay, but they almost seem too heavy. I can't really tell if you have a bass going, but that might be my speakers. A more dominent bass would be nice. The lyrics are weird, but unique, so I give you props. I actually really like the way you half yell/sing during the chorus. It gives it a really good grunge feel to it. Overall 4/5, 7/10. Keep up the good work.