The rhythm is boring and repetitive, and the lead guitar is horribly out of key and sounds like noise throughout the whole thing. The bass has a neat pattern going, and the drums are just as repetitive as the guitar. But it's 43 seconds long, so that's not really long enough to get on someone's nerves. In a general point of reference to the track length though, it's repetitive.
I like the sound of the bass and the drums, though.
Just a bit more composition and/or theory practice is all.
It turned out awesome, and it's pretty sweet. We should make another one.
This time dont make it suck.