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Dreams (Mans0n Edit)

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the first song I've ever submitted!


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not bad

For this being your first song submitted, it's awesome! I'm excited to see you grow as an artist!


not to bad

Mans0n responds:

thanks for the criticism.

Excellent start

This was fantastic for a first song Mans0n,the beats were awesome and the best part was the vocals i think cause it all went together perfectly though the volume needs a bit more tweaking on the syncing but overall it was a very enjoyable song and i hope you make many more tracks in the future. =)

Mans0n responds:

Ahh I have made many more my friend! check out some of my recent stuff!

and thanks for the review!

i like it but

i like it, like the vocals ;-)

the only thing is that the effects are very sharp, they dont blend with the music! but dude, the vocals are great ! :O and those reverb claps were a really nice touch to the song=)

only thing i can recommend is that you clean up your song, its a bit messy, its like wheres the buildup and the chorus and? o_0 xD

and to accually use z3ta and Nexus or Vanguard to create your synth is a very good idea! because the sytrus that is presampled in FL are not great : /

and because you use them your song is pulled down in score : /

but i really like where it can go! very original and incredibly cool!

just try to experiment more with your synths and the construction of your song=) a mastering tutorial also helpls, just search for mastering + FL on youtube and your well on your way man ;-)

cant wait to hear more! please PM me when you make more ^_^


Mans0n responds:

thanks! though this was my first song ever practically.

Credits & Info


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Jul 29, 2008
5:20 PM EDT
Drum N Bass
File Info
2.5 MB
2 min 43 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.