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Run Don't Walk (Complete)

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Dragonfly114 made the original a long time ago, I got his permission to add on to it, here it is... Run Don't Walk (Complete) sorry about the ending... I messed it up :(

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punk is not my speciality but...

i do know about production skills :P. i can feel the main guitar and can tell when there is a good musical mind at work, which this track definitely has, where the lead guitar is pretty good, however i can tell that ur not really too good at producing (not trying to offend or anything). the tune was good, the drums were okay, but very generic. heres dome tips which i hope will help:

1) the samples u used for this track (all of them) seemed very basic and kinda bad, they all sound very low quality (particularly the guitar, snares and hihat), u should try to find some decent samples which sound realistic and have a proper feel of the genre, rather than using what i think sounds like the default samples from FL studio / Fruity Loops (which are known to be terrible). downloads some decent Vst's / virtual synths, there are loads of free good ones out there.

2) the hihats are very gerneric, repeitive and robotic, try altering the hihat sequence every few bars, to give it more of a live feel rather than a repetition.

3) the sound levels of the track need fixing, turn up the kick and snare a little, and turning the hihats down a little, or turn down the main guitar.

4) the track is very restricted to drum and guitar, try adding a bass guitar / bassline to give it more of a genuine feel.

5) once you've done all this, try out a few fx, such as a reverb on the drums to give that little extra finish.

hope this helps :]

T-Dog114 responds:

Thanks for the fair criticism, I didn't know how to use fruity loops that well when I made it, I lost the old file and I can't change it, which sucks...

good

respect!

I love what you did with it.

Nice upvert to mine... Thanks for updating it... Your right, It needed a better ending

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Uploaded
Jul 29, 2008
6:08 AM EDT
Genre
Punk
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37 sec

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