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The only things that need cleaning here is your freaking ears! This song is AWESOME!!!

Nice work!

Not that I know what I'm talking about, but this seems to have a bit of a grunge feel to it. At the very least it sounds dirty.
Great job! The drums are great, and for some reason I really like the cymbal bit.
Obviously the guitar is amazing as well.
Personally I don't see how it needs to be cleaned up. It all fits together well.
Overall 10/10 nice job.

Yeah....

It sounds like it would make an EXCELLENT song if you cleaned up the guitar. I don't know if you're starting to get used to recording like me, but it sounds like you could work on recording... like me.
THe pinched harmonics sound really good.
Add some bass and clean the guitar up a bit and it should make a top rank song!

its good

good but needs to be cleaned up (too much haze)

mmm distortion

Timing's a little off at parts but other than that sounds good. Personally I'd love it to be faster. When it drops into the hardcore part especially, I feel the drive but I'd feel it more if it were a wee bit faster.

I love the held wammy bar notes. Only other criticism I could make is be a bit more technical with your chord strumming. Some are left to bleed a bit longer than is necessary.

Great stuff, dude. :)