Well, I tried again, and from my first possibility I created this, I hope it is an improvement. I've been pumping out a lot of different things lately seeing if anything is really good. So anyways, here's the second installment, reviews and constructive critisism is welcome as always. Please enjoy.
Good
the intro gave the impression of some midi junk. but when the guitar(?) came in i was surprised, the drums are very complimenting of the overall melody and structure. the synths are spacey
basically i heart this song and all its spaceyness good job
check out my music, i think you'll like it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Oni-FatBoy 
