good. not metal though.

hmm another good song. not exactly metal. but a very interesting song. your music so far from what I've seen is very peculiar but a great sound. as in idk. interesting.

huh metal?

yeah that was kind of interesting , the guit is good but still the drum gets anoying with time.You could do better METAL songs if you had a metal drum and Added an other guit to make pwer riffs.It was still kinda good but your in metal category so accept the critics :P

What?

Wrong category much? Lol. Oh well. It happens to the best of us.

Anyway, I kinda like this.... It's kinda technoish, if that's a word. Ima download this.

Well..

For starters, it ain't heavy metal. The solo in the middle MIGHT swing for a heavy metal solo, but even then, FL Slayer just doesn't cut it. I'd suggest getting some more generic sounds. Getting sounds and really working to the core with them will be key. Otherwise, the song is just bland and looping with all sorts of different sounds making it awkward.