It was good, but I think the main melody has to be played with a different instrument(s). Strings, maybe?
Ahh, i made this song one summer during the end of the night, the yellow sunlight was trickling in and i had no duties to attend to, no chores, nothing to worry about, just a fridge full of refreshments and a powerhouse of a compy with fruityloops ticking along. Good times.
Great start, obviously musical. Problem is the base - it need to work with the drum beat, not by itself or with the 'high sound' or 'superstructure'. Its also too strong. Why?
Well, it makes your piece almost poppy. . . and I think you wanted to avoid that. Flatten the base, and spike the drums and I think your work will 'clean up' a bit.
I was just sort of spacing out when i was listening to your music, it made me feel purple, dun ask y.... but hey, if your music can make ppl feel colours then i suppose that just aint too bad :)
nice use of the plucked, usually i find it sounds cheesy, but you made good use of it. i liked the drum beat alot. it had a good ambient feel to it, too bad it got cut short. nice work though, keep it up.
An awesome, awesome piece. The music almost effortlessly toys with my imagination and the beat goes so well with the string/synth effect in the background. I could definitely see this being a really great asset in a movie or game. Keep up the fantastic work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.