Not bad at all for just starting out! You have some good chord ideas in here. I won't be harsh with production critique because I understand that is something that grows with experience. I agree with the previous reviewer that a beat (even a slow one) would make it sound more complete, but it's okay. Good luck in the future! :D
Thanks for the review i cant even believe my songs are gettting any listens much less reviews. I see what you mean i may make yet another version of this song in the future but it all depends ive been playing around with some ideas but no songs yet. feel free to check out my other songs, and thanks again.
I really like it. Great work keep it up. Maybe add a beat and some other stuff and this song would be really really good!
kee it up
Thank you very much for the compliments. I really hoped this song would be good. anyway thanks again for the tips too be sure to watch out for more of my work which will be coming in the next few weeks.