It's missing.

The audio quality was leaning on the bad side, but although that was forgiving, the fact that this whole thing was missing a climax was... bothersome.
The rhythm was solid and consistent, but it went nowhere; it was like listening to the same 20 or so seconds repeat with a single change that was barely noticeable.
It just felt like it was stuck in one place, and stayed there.
Also in the beginning, I think it was turned up too fast. Like a sped up intro.

Not being mean, just honest criticism.

Oh! Oh! Oh!

This one deserve to be added in favorites too!

Turn it down a little

The clipping was a noticeable distraction throughout the entire piece, and sort of detracted from the experience.