Hey, cool remix.

I've been listening to the original, and I like the melodies. Good job representing those in your remix. However, two things. First, the kick drum seems to make it clip. I don't know if it actually does, but the kick sounds kind of ugly. Second, I know Whip it as an energetic, punk-electric dance track. The remix is cool, but I'm not sure if making a modern, chillout version captures as much of the energy. But hey, you still did pretty well with the remix; keep at it and try to expand your horizons. :)