Strange

Very weird, but quite cool. Reminded me of the music for like a David Firth flash or something. Would make a good background for one of those weird movies or games. Maybe not a song to listen to on its own :P Great job though. Loved the bassy feel

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Almost..

The voices and sfx were kool. It was kinda creepy. not bad.

Suggestions: I really dislike it when people make songs out of sound clips and sfx. If you really want to make a good song, use a realy instrument and create melodies. Only then will you begin to master the art of songwriting.

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To you?

Sorry, but I can get a better price elsewhere. This piece isn't the best I've heard by a long shot. You need to concentrate on adding other things to the tune, rather than a dodgy little vocal sample.

Beat. Melody. Counter-melody. Those are the three things that you need to produce to make a nice sounding tune. You need to work on those three, before you consider trying to add the vocal samples to the piece.

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Ooo.

This one wasn't as interesting-- You didn't sound very demonic if that was what you were aiming for. Want a tip from a Metal drummer? Blow our brains out for like, one second and throw us back into the pit of darkness and silence-- But it's not silence, hearing the noises (Pan) from left and right, repeadidly getting louder until you throw up a goey, crazy, psycho-minded apocolyspe right into our ears. Try foot steps every once and a while. You could improve. And you already -took- my soul from 'Don't Listen To This Song'. Does this mean I could've gotten some moolah off of that beat thing? Neat.
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Hrm...

Very strange. It had a very deflated sound. Most of the song hardly had any musical quality to it, which really hinders in the critiquing process.
I think this is a good starting point for an interesting song. My best advice would be to try to make some melodies for this song. I could picture it being a very dark, slow tune if you worked at it.
Overall, I'd say it needs a of work. If you have any intentions of improving it, then making a main "theme" or melody would be the best place so start. Once you have a good riff, the rest just tends to follow.

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