cool

u get 10 cause 1. ist youre first and 2.its cool but needs work

undecided

i really love the melody as it goes on...and on...but what is it what we listen to ? ;) Sound like an old radio that plays without bass...and the mic switching on & off should really be cutted out ^^ There is also some touching and handling hearable ( is that a word ? ;) ).
So, will ya tell us what the sound plays...and it was created ? I really hate it to give no stars...but to give you a real critique or an useful comment, i need to know how you made it...
Will rate this with 5 stars (instead of none) because i like the melody ( wich could be played by a cell phone or an R2-D2 :D ) and i want to push you a bit...i am just wondering what you could create with better equip and some more planning....and the most important thing for you to learn, is mastering ! Surely you can do better (and i think you know this !?)

Keep it up, mate !

Cheers !

cool...

it was kinda the same thing over and over and the quality wasnt great. but nice job : )