Nice song. Nothing else to say, except that it is a little bland.
I love when songs progress like this. Too bad it was just a demo/example though because you might of been able to make a pretty cool song out of it.
~MABYE i'll make a song out of it.
Well done exercise
You've got something decent started - this doesn't really go far musically at all, though, so it's not really worth anything more than what you learned from it.
-KNOWLEDGE IZ POWER!!!
Not bad for a start
Since this is your first progression song, I'm sure it'll get better over time. Had a cool beat though. Keep on keepin on.
-I'll keep keeping on with the keeps of the keeps and the kee---wha?
Low frequency, its all highs right now o>O
-KEEP IT ²'d