Something different
Something different here and thats what i was looking for, you have shown that, it was the little things here and there on this that made it pretty interesting and unique ofcourse. Now here was something different, i love the title and i especially like how this has a dark touch to it, also the rain in the baclround makes this work very well especially with the title and all, but a good dark feel here as mentioned. good workonthis piece. I thought there could have been more but it was already unique and such, you had my attention as soon as it started, and love the little detail you have put fourth on this one.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so that brings us to this little area of some improvment, not sure where to start since most of this was pretty good, but i think you can fine-tune a few points and i will do my best to get them accorss in a positive way ofcourse. There was few to coment and detail since it was already good, but maybe adding more edge and making it longer but give it some more piano playing maybe even get into a faster phase down the stretch.