Very nice

so this one was very nice work here the sound quality was good but the sound volume could be louder and this could be longer, but I do like the theme here with this track here and would be great to see you extend this one anyways nice work and sound

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the sound quality was good but the sound volume could be louder and this could be longer

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This isn't your work!

Dude this is "Blood" from Roroni Kenshin, just sped up a bit, if U don't beleive me I'll send you a clip that I downloaded.

title

the begining sounds good but it is repeditive... like most of your work! also what is the title have to do with the sound? sounds like a a water pipe or ungerground cave...