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Unfinished Story (original)

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hello guys, well umm, here is some crazy stuff, i dont know what i just did there, i was feeling bored and i wanted to make some music, then some melodies then some beat and i just did and mixed things like a crazy drunkard lol, well hope its right or acceptable for ears lol cause i dont know jajaja, did my best on the rest but lets see, ill have my fingers crossed ! XC enjoy the madness of a mad man lol but im not madmax............... ok nuff said ,enjoy :D

EDIT: i was hopping to see some bad and good comments or maybe just bad but im not gettin either T_T
if u rate and have time give a small sugestiong i was hoping to see what i could improve to it :)

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I like what you did there. So, boredom can be helpful to be creative, I guess. ^^

It sounds a bit rough here and there, but I guess you didn't put that much effort into the mixing (at least that's my impression when reading your description).
Some of the instruments are a bit too loud (like the drums), so they are overpowering the main melody.

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Its pretty good! I like how the main beat sort of started straight away, no waiting need at all. :D, it kept me interested throughout the track with the variety of beats and different sounds you used which i thought were really cool, it all flowed excellently as well, good track my man!!

Also i was kind of expecting a half finished piece due to the title, but the ending was good. Overall it was a really cool track and im hoping to see more from you. :D


Reminds me of Eurovision...

A good tune, with a riff that sounds a little like 'save all your kisses for me', which won the Eurovision Song Contest back in the day.

Good use of the keyboards to take it away from the start. You've put some good effort and variation into this piece. It's a shame that you didn't give a bit more variation to the latter part of the tune, as it could have used just a little more on the variation side - when it did come in, it was a little too late for my liking, added maybe as an afterthought.

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Pretty Good

This is certainly a pretty good tune, although I'm not too keen on some parts of this myself, much of it does sound very good which is nice to hear. You have a decent opening and the thing ends well too, which are both good things to have, but I would have had some build up at the start, it might have worked better than going right into the song as you did with this.

I hear no real problems with this though overall, I mean it all does come together well so I can't really say much there, just some more build up on the intro part I think would be good to have but other than that, I can't hear much that needs improving.



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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

thank you very much for the suggestiong, i guess ill make another version with a more built opening or a buildup since its quite forward the one we have here :P, and ill notify you when its uploaded :D thanks :D

Sounds Good

I really enjoyed this. The melody was quite funky and it really matched up well with the percussion. This long song really featured a ton of different sounds, but it managed to keep the same central feel throughout the whole track up until around 3:45. That transition seemed kind of abrupt and the whole song seemed to get so much lighter there, or something. It sounded good, but seemed slightly out of place in comparison to the rest of the song.
The track sounded really good, overall. I really enjoyed the listen.
Good work!

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

i guess the 3:45 its the experimental ending , i have another version without that ending ill upload it one of these days, im glad the song end up being liked hehehe, glad th perc worked too cause took me a while to arrange it :D, thanks :D

Credits & Info


4.30 / 5.00

Jun 22, 2008
2:42 AM EDT
File Info
3.9 MB
4 min 15 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.