j'ai hate de voir la full version!
sounds good but needs work
the first bit was really nice and had the ambiance that you want in an... ambient song... like the nice reverb and distant percussion but i think once you introduce the bass and guitar everything gets really muddy. maybe those instruments have too much reverb and all of it piled on top of one another makes it dirty. try cleaning that part up and maybe have more of that awesome intro before you have too much going on. also i liked the sfx you had going on behind the guitar and bass.
keep up the work on this and pm me when you finish it. and if you have the time, could you check out my two latest songs, i'd appreciate it.
Thanks for the tips :) I'll certainly check out your songs when I get a chance.
try using different sounds