You really are good at flows
This song got som flow in it too. Nice vocals added too. Also love the build up ofc
Author Comments
ENG : Hi Everyone I am DJ Ottie (Dennis den otter) I am 14 years old and I made a track with a good beat and instruments so check it out and leave a message (doesn't matter if it is negative comment or positive) so I can make the song better or let the track as it is check my profile at newgrounds and go if you want to my other Web address which has to do with my sports (darts) but on newgrounds I play for DJ Ottie because I like to make tracks . so check at my newgrounds website called www.DJ-Ottie/newgrounds.c om
NL : Heej iedereen ik ben DJ Ottie (Dennis den otter) ik ben 14 jaar oud en dit liedje heb ik gemaakt met een goeie beat erin en nog meer instrumenten dus luister mijn liedje en kijk wat je ervan vind en stuur me een bericht over het liedje wat je ervan vond ( maakt niet uit of het negatief is of positief) want dan kan ik er wat mee zoals het liedje verbeteren of zo laten. bekijk ook even mijn profiel op newgrounds en als je wilt kun je ook naar mijn andere site gaan die te maken heeft met mijn sport (darten) maar op newgrounds speel ik voor DJ Ottie dus kijk op www.DJ-Ottie/newgrounds.c om
Yaey
Hey I use Magix Music to
but i haven't Used The demo Sounds so Much but This is good :D
very cool
wow, nice and original build-up, and you managed to keep it up through the rest of the song, nice vocals you added ;-) great song=)
come check out some of my stuff if you want man ;-)
-Beating-Source-
Nice :D
Nice tracks so far hard dance is slightly right but in my view hard dance is :hardcore: in Hard kicks Tight Beat And club pumping Hardcore synths but this is like Light Dance i still like it :D And i noticed thanks to a translator Your
Dutch =D and one wierd thing i noticed dutch translated to english = Out of order.
Heres what DJ-Martcore said.english wise..
"Only net what which other guest says. That lasertjes a smattering irritating for the rest sounds, however, groovy man is Go this way by!" you can see what he is saying but its incorrect order lolz...."english" translated atleast..
DJ-Ottie responds:
i willl you what he said he said in dutch : Alleen net wat die andere gast zegt..
Die lasertjes zijn een beetje irritant
Voor de rest klinkt wel gaaf man
Ga zo door !
-DJ Martcore
In english it is : Just like the other guy said was that that laserbeams are a little bit annoying but further without the laserbeams it sounds fantastic.
thats what he said
Yours faithfully , Dj Ottie (dennis den otter)
not bad...
Overall thats a pretty nice track, though a few things ruining it:
-The lasers are fine, but make them less noisy.
-The part from 0:36-0:49 is lacking something, try adding some light backround.
-The vocals make it sound less dancish, try lowering em/remove em.
that's all =)
DJ-Ottie responds:
thx I deleted the lasers and put voices in it like move to the beat but the lasers are gone listen to the song DJ Ottie - Hard Dance (no lasers) thx forr the hint and listen if this one is betterr ok ?
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