I'll admit it..

I skipped through to the last half, but from what i heard.. thats where it all happened.

It turned into some crazy 1980s sounding track, not unlike a sinister Safety Dance. Pretty amusing, but the bulk of the track needs variation.

Listening, and reviewing.

Generic entrance, but no big deal.

It was a bit too repetitive in the beginning, and then you threw in that bit of variation and that brought it up a bit. But then out of nowhere it just... Ended.
I understand this is a demo but at least let us know it's over. :P Give a small crash, hit, something?

The percussion needs variation, the main melody needs to change up more often and... That's all I can really tell you...
I'm not very good at this music. Heh.

7/10 because this has potential. And you actually put some work into it. I actually liked it so, it's not that.

Keep goin' at it!

4/5