Great,
Love this whole tune. A real sence of mood to the whole piece and it was very emotive. Wasnt to much going on progression wise and could have done with a clamactic middle and a more defined intro and outro.
The drum roll was very styalized of these old military pieces and it was thouroughly enjoyable to listen to. Some of the wind instruments were played to close togethor and gave a rather unnatural sound. I think it would have been nice if the drums faded out at the again, that would have added to the mood and feel of the piece. In all I would say that I thoroughly enjoyed this but I think you should work on the points I made, then this could be something really special.
Good use of all the different sounds in your expansion, keep it up.
Kind regards -
Sirtom93.