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Bob-Lucid

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Trying to stick with the Dream-like theme, this time encompasing the power of Lucid Dreaming.

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Nice

Well the beat is nice does seem like it could use more to it like more variety of sounds and mixtures to this as this was nice but could still use more but overall I like it so nice job indeed great stuff here I look forward to even more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More mixture and variety

~X~

Hmm

I'd be giving this more stars if you'd added some more variation to the bass beat - it's quite dull on that token and I'd like to hear if you can offer us something different. A break in the middle of the melody, to allow the bass to take over for a little while would certainly add to the variation of the track and would allow the bass to shine through.

Otherwise, the tune gets a little samey. Maybe tone down the volume of the melody, as it's quite dominant at present.

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bass gets a bit dull.

Overall, this was just straddling an uncomfortable position - it wasn't quite engaging or intricate enough for me to enjoy sitting, listening and wasn't furious or 'passionate' enough to inspire me to get up and dance.

I love the slow synths at the start.

The bass that pops in at :24 and continues on throughout the entire piece is a bit overpowering - specially when it gets to 1:20-2:00. It just sorta made that part seem really repetitive to me and didn't sound passionate enough to be repeated so many times. I'd rather have been able to hear the synths and whatnot you've got on top.

The :30 - :50 part is way cool though. Love the sorta semi-staccato break-beat-y sound.

Ending was cool too.

but maybe either add more fury or more intricacy and a touch more gentleness - with this tune straddling the 2 sides, it currently fails at both imo.

Bob-Music responds:

Thanks for your review, I find critisism very hard to take on this song though as it's my personal favourite. I've taken on board what you've said though and I can see what you mean, I haven't really got the hang of mastering yet so I could be hearing it very differently to you, I do need to work on varying the bass a little though.

Thanks again for your review

Wow

Very catchy. I love the synth work. The bass underneath the melody at 01:00 is very daunting. Sorry this isn't the longest review ever, but I can only say I like it in so many ways lol. Keep up the good work!

Bob-Music responds:

Reviews don't have to be long, they just have to have a point to them. And from yours I think the point is that you like it, and in that case I'm very pleased.

Thanks for listening and thanks for your review :0)

\m/

The main melody is very nice and, well, lucid. Sadly, the drum beat is too quiet and can hardly be heard when the main melody is playing.

You should try to increase the volume of the beats to get a much better sound.

Also, some more variations from the melody would be nice. You already added some breaks in here, but it still gets very repititive after a while.

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Bob-Music responds:

Thanks for your review, if you read then and get a chance then please re-listen as I have updated the file with better mixing and EQ etc.

Credits & Info

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Listens
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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
14
Score
3.89 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 14, 2008
5:48 PM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
5 MB
2 min 44 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.