It was too simple.

7 because it wasn't a god awful piece of shit. It was actually pretty good. You need to make this more elaborate, however. Add a more complicated melody, have fading sounds, and tone down the bass a litlle. Make the bass match the melody a little more, blend the sounds tog ether well, and you'll have a real winner.

ugh

it was ok could be major improvements but its not bad
7/10 4/5

You know...

That realy great and I like it alot!
5/5 10/10 nice work!