It's not half bad
I mean, I liked it, it just doesn't stand out among other death metal songs...
Even production-wise, if you put a little more bass into the track it would even sound better, but even so it sounded somewhat generic, and the title doesn't help either, since for example about half of Cannibal Corpse's songs have to do with unborns, not to mention the band Dying Fetus.
Btw I certainly don't think it sounds anything like Death, definitely Obituary if anything, mixed with Cannibal Corpse or Necrophagist vocals.