Riiiight...
So trance isn't really my kind of music, but I've listened to quite a number of songs in this genre and sorry, but you have a great deal of work ahead to be good in this. First of all: this isn't trancey a bit, just some simple computer plucking. So, the second: you need to get a better sound... But besides that, it isn't that bad. Believe me, I've heard a lot worse. Work hard and one day you may become a star, or at least a capable trance composer. Peace!