My comments:

Your music writing is obviously very good. You are good at coming up with ideas and your transitions are very good. The only problem I saw was the overwhelming treble. Your main instrument was very boring to listen to. I think this song would be a million times better if you just changed that main instrument. Maybe some synth with low attack. Idk.

Other than that, the song was great!

4.07 / 5.00 (+ 0.37)

Always high scores on new songs :-)

You did a good job on the melody I like it. The choice of instruments is also nice. Sounds a bit country / rock.

Can't really tell what should be changed, its not my style of music = )

Greetz Duba
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Good song

The beginning sounded like an old medieval song, it was different, in a good way. I couldn't help but notice that the snare drum beat was sightly off. I think it's where the loop ends and the next loop begins, you might want to put a half beat rest in there. 4/5