HUH?

Sounds like someone is behind me with a Butcher Knife about to 1) Rape 2) Kill me and the last sounds I hear are heavy breathing. This needs some more work buddy.

There is a darkness to it with the heavy breathing. Although, I'd try to make more evil rhythms and beats to get that dark evil vibe you may be looking for.

Anyway, man. best of luck. peace

Uhh...

Is that breathing in the background... anyway, not really my thing... needs tweaking...

reason

it's OK. good start. keep it up.
Try to play with Reason's switches and filters :)