Review

Hey Melonsquare,

So your first song ehh? Well I'm going to be very encouraging. Here is what I thought

Well, it is better than my very first song. I deleted it because it was soo bad. :) You have the techno sounds and some happy medium core stuff. I like that techno fx you have. I like the fast attack on the lead techno instrument.

26 seconds in you have a soothing synth which I enjoy.

Here are some suggestions:
You need to make sure your instruments are on key. I notice too much dissonance. Make sure you keep your composition at a constant key signature.
Have more variety with the drums and change the composition of the techno leads and synth to keep things diverse.

Why did you delay this submission for so long? Overall, it reminded me of snes games. Don't know what band is Marathon....I know a video game is called Marathon which is produced by bungie. It doesn't sound like your song though. Keep up the great work. Again, work on keeping everything in tune and everything will sound good. 10/10 to start you off. 5/5 vote too.

Bye for now