So your first song ehh? Well I'm going to be very encouraging. Here is what I thought
Well, it is better than my very first song. I deleted it because it was soo bad. :) You have the techno sounds and some happy medium core stuff. I like that techno fx you have. I like the fast attack on the lead techno instrument.
26 seconds in you have a soothing synth which I enjoy.
Here are some suggestions:
You need to make sure your instruments are on key. I notice too much dissonance. Make sure you keep your composition at a constant key signature.
Have more variety with the drums and change the composition of the techno leads and synth to keep things diverse.
Why did you delay this submission for so long? Overall, it reminded me of snes games. Don't know what band is Marathon....I know a video game is called Marathon which is produced by bungie. It doesn't sound like your song though. Keep up the great work. Again, work on keeping everything in tune and everything will sound good. 10/10 to start you off. 5/5 vote too.
Bye for now
Well, thanks for the review, Music-story.
As for the delay, I had uploaded Supersonic first because I thought it was better, thus having a better reception. Then, I realized that I had Fusion left, the first one I made. Both were made in late 2007/early 2008, and are my only full music creations so far.
I wouldn't say I'm much of a music man, as you can see. I don't have much experience with it (I play by ear) nor do I have much inspiration. But don't think this will be the last of me in the audio session, there will be more.
EDIT: By the way, Marathon was a game, not a band, exactly the one you mentioned. I didn't see any similarities either, who knows.