Nah

Not good at all. The beat was ok but extremely simple - typical hip-hop beat. The vocals were terrible. Bad quality. I couldn't understand a single thing you said. Sounds pretty effortless to me so I can only give you a 3, sorry.

-ShortMonkey-

You should have labeled this [KK] Masta of Raps

Feels like something the [KK] would put out.

Ok, jokes aside. The intro really if anything would make people not take you as seriously as you may want. I'd change up the intro to something that sounds better than the static sound.

You lowered your voice or something a bit with your audio mixing program? It sounds you tried to mix the sound a little bit? It doesn't feel too natural and it's harder to take seriously.

One last thing you may want to work on your delivery and have it flow better from your mouth. Some parts sounded a bit stilted.

The beat to the song is ok but this is all constructive and could use a bit more work.